In a winter white
In this loose, brief spacesnow & stars glide,the glassy mind evolvesas we experience the idea of breathing,marvel at this ascending warmth.Here, we are like wild meteorsin the immense diamond of...
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Jaz,I can remember so many days (and nights) of the greatest po jo flowing from your pen,but none is lovelier than this one..."The moon beckons, transient & dazzling,reminds us of our mortal...
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The images are so good in this. It's very beautiful and left me wanting more too. Excellent write Jazmine!
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Thank you so much Sarah and Moonchild~the muse really kicked in that last stanza~
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Jaz ~A beautiful Impressionistcally painted poem! Your colors and cosmic auras are wonderful!And your close...."The moon beckons, transient & dazzling,reminds us of our mortal chords,our perishing...
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M'Lor--In winter white out night tonight, snow and stars collide as you scribed, foreshadowing this telling warmth, breathing together, harmonic diamonds soaring meteoric into colorwheels'...
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Jaz:At first I thought you were out with a snowman; but then I saw it was Phish dressed in his "Winter white" suit.
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This just fills me with awe, the way your descriptions and metaphors bring this piece to life. The last line just blows me away. This is so lovely Jaz, Zaida
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Thanks Maire, Jan, Phish, Jean, Gro and Zaida.I appreciate the read
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and now it's becaon time,they must have got new batteries,this one glows so brightly..
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Jaz, Sarah got to comment on my fav part of this first( that last lovely stanza) but this is such a pretty one with lots of rich detail. Great!Jared
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Jaz,Had to return. Love the sounds in this. Nice syllabic voice.Jan
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Magical write, jaz Loved the word choices in this.. it painted such a lovely image~!
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thank you Jared and Alaura...and Jan {again!}I'm so happy you liked my poem
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In this loose, brief spacesnow & stars glide,the glassy mind evolvesas we experience the idea of breathing,marvel at this ascending warmth.Here, we are like wild meteorsin the immense diamond of...
View ArticleRe: In a winter white
Jaz,I can remember so many days (and nights) of the greatest po jo flowing from your pen,but none is lovelier than this one..."The moon beckons, transient & dazzling,reminds us of our mortal...
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The images are so good in this. It's very beautiful and left me wanting more too. Excellent write Jazmine!
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